Noah s correct, I dont think it will hurt you, however I am insane anyways so I have been cleaning it up 
Here is what I used and got everything I needed taken care of.
NAME
ADDRESS
CITY,STATE ZIP
Equifax, TU, Experian
Address
City, State, Zip
DATE
To Whom It May Concern:
I am trying to clean up all of my credit reports and need to get my Personal Profile Information updated. Below you will find all my current that I would like changed.
Could you please complete your investigation in the 30 days from the time you receive my dispute letter, and either have it verified, corrected or deleted from my report.
Items being reported on my credit incorrectly: -- I put this in bold
Date of Birth:
Names: I had a LOT but did 5-10 each time
Current Address: A LOT also, take your time
Past Address: Varies
Current Employer:
Past Employer:
Please change the incorrect information to read as follows: -- I put this in bold
Date of Birth:
Names: I had a LOT but did 5-10 each time
Current Address: A LOT also, take your time
Past Address: Varies
Current Employer:
Past Employer:
Documents enclosed as proof: -- I put this in bold
1. Valid CA Drivers License (or whatever you have to prove the above)
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
Sincerely,
NAME
Also as a side note, unless there is some major documentation, I keep my main dispute letters to 1 page only. Too much and they may blow a fuse lol
Here is what I used and got everything I needed taken care of.NAME
ADDRESS
CITY,STATE ZIP
Equifax, TU, Experian
Address
City, State, Zip
DATE
To Whom It May Concern:
I am trying to clean up all of my credit reports and need to get my Personal Profile Information updated. Below you will find all my current that I would like changed.
Could you please complete your investigation in the 30 days from the time you receive my dispute letter, and either have it verified, corrected or deleted from my report.
Items being reported on my credit incorrectly: -- I put this in bold
Date of Birth:
Names: I had a LOT but did 5-10 each time
Current Address: A LOT also, take your time
Past Address: Varies
Current Employer:
Past Employer:
Please change the incorrect information to read as follows: -- I put this in bold
Date of Birth:
Names: I had a LOT but did 5-10 each time
Current Address: A LOT also, take your time
Past Address: Varies
Current Employer:
Past Employer:
Documents enclosed as proof: -- I put this in bold
1. Valid CA Drivers License (or whatever you have to prove the above)
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
Sincerely,
NAME
Also as a side note, unless there is some major documentation, I keep my main dispute letters to 1 page only. Too much and they may blow a fuse
lol