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electra
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Feedback please - GW letter

Adapted from another one someone posted here (thanks!).  What do you guys think?

 

Dear Ms. XXX,

I am writing to ask you and the County of San Mateo for a good will deletion of your reporting of a collection to the Credit Reporting Agencies. A couple of years ago I was given a citation for expired registration and insurance in your county which I then failed to resolve and pay in a timely manner. Both the tickets and the delay in paying were my fault and the result of poor planning and organization during a very difficult time in my life when I was in the process of divorce, feeling overwhelmed and struggling financially.  My registration and insurance are current and the account has been paid in full at this time.

 I am humbly asking for your help. Would you be willing to look at my account and offer me the courtesy of removing this collection account from the Credit Reporting Agencies? I know it is a lot to ask and it probably falls outside your normal business practices.  Any accommodation or advice would be greatly appreciated.



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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

2 thumbs up!


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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

Sweet and to the point... I vote that its a GO!

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electra
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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

Thanks guys!  Wish me luck!



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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

Good Luck!!!


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