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Feedback please - GW letter

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Feedback please - GW letter

Adapted from another one someone posted here (thanks!).  What do you guys think?

 

Dear Ms. XXX,

I am writing to ask you and the County of San Mateo for a good will deletion of your reporting of a collection to the Credit Reporting Agencies. A couple of years ago I was given a citation for expired registration and insurance in your county which I then failed to resolve and pay in a timely manner. Both the tickets and the delay in paying were my fault and the result of poor planning and organization during a very difficult time in my life when I was in the process of divorce, feeling overwhelmed and struggling financially.  My registration and insurance are current and the account has been paid in full at this time.

 I am humbly asking for your help. Would you be willing to look at my account and offer me the courtesy of removing this collection account from the Credit Reporting Agencies? I know it is a lot to ask and it probably falls outside your normal business practices.  Any accommodation or advice would be greatly appreciated.



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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

2 thumbs up!

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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

Sweet and to the point... I vote that its a GO!

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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

Thanks guys!  Wish me luck!



Starting Score: TU:584 | EQ 584
Current Score: TU FICO: 711 | EQ FICO 713 | EX (USAA FAKO) 779
Goal Score: 780 across the board


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Re: Feedback please - GW letter

Good Luck!!!

Starting Score: 504
July 2013 score:
EQ FICO 819, TU08 778, EX "806 lender pull 07/26/2013
Goal Score: All Scores 760+, Newest goal 800+
Take the myFICO Fitness Challenge

Current scores after adding $81K in CLs and 2 new cars since July 2013
EQ:809 TU 777 EX 790 Now it's just garden time!

June 2017 update: All scores over 820, just pure gardening now.
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