UPDATE: Experian just dropped it off my report. My score jumped to 772 from 728. Now waiting on TransUnion and Equifax.
Starting Score: 666 EX FAKO / 646 EQ FAKO / 656 TU FAKO
Thanks. It was my last negative on Experiain. Now I just need the other two to catch up and hope a GW letter gets a 5 year old 30 day late removed from EQ and TU. The killer is that it was on student loans that report as 4 TL's so it is actually 4 lates for 1 missed check.
That is awesome that it worked out that well! I am just starting my path on PFD and GW letters. Would you mind putting up here (or pm me) what you said in each of yours that worked for you. I have looked at several others on here and am ready to send tomorrow with some information chagnes, but I am not sure now, whether I want to (or should) include requesting a 10 day to delete or stating that they have to agree not to discuss the offer with a third-party. I do not want to push the wrong buttons and sound like I am scolding or demanding. I want to be humble and truthful, but also, get the dang things removed! 
Thank you!